I have written this lyric.I don't know it is good/bad/worse. I need your help.Does this lyric deserve to be composed?You know for that I have to spend some money.Please,help.
"I need a true friend in life"
verse1:
I want my love stay with me,
even the world goes past me
I choose my tears to comfort me,
than all the rivers go past me
verse2:
Everyday is the hard day to spend,
without a friend
But never dies the hope at the end,
when there is love to mend
chorus:
I need a true friend in life,to carry on
With happiness and worry of the world to live on
I need a true friend in life, who understands
The forms of hearts, and the minds
verse3:
I build my dream and the shelter
I share my love and the prayer
Oh! my friend,hold my hand
I take you over the sky,under the land
repeat chorus:
Bridge:
I can live all my life for my love
I can give everything I have for my love
I know I will be broken in a failure
Like a wrecked ship in the sea,without a sailor
repeat chorus: