Hello sathi haru yo chai euta geet ho hamle record hanya,, kasto lagchha hernu hos hoi... Recorded at opus studio, ktm. leave your comments and criticisms below..... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=inTVkcU46fg

I'm commenting on this one, not as a music pundit but as a rock music fan.. this is what i think..

compliment - different music, good fusion of melody and rock, good development of vocal along with the rise in the pitch of music, nice beat,
comments - better shorten it to around 5 minutes or so,  the vocal seems to be lightly overshadowed by the music whenever the song goes on high pitch,  if you are targetting this song for all Nepalese people then i think u should do better on lyrics and vocal (I'm talking about a little more simple lyrics and clear vocal.)

thanks for the suggestion bro. i'm gonna put more of my efforts on the lyircs as well as vocal.