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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-03-05 4:15
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मित्रहरु मेरो पनि एउटा हाईकु पढीदिनु परो है त! येसो आफनो सुजाब पनि दिनु परो यो दिबाना लाइ!!!!!! रन्?केर गयो सबैलाइ भेट्?यो हँ - हँ र बुझें - बुझें भन्?यो फरक्?क फर्?यो!
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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-03-05 4:19
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यो पनि हेरौ है त कस्?तो हुन्?छ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! भ्रष्?टाचारि नेता, दु:ख: पाउने जनता धोखा दिने प्रेमिका, सबै समानता?
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shirish
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Posted on 11-03-05 5:19
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diwana jee Haiku ko niyam kanun sab poli dine bhanya ?
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Gautam B.
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Posted on 11-03-05 6:05
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दिल दिवानाजी, राम्रो प्रयास। म पनि हाइकुको विद्यार्थी भएकोले थोरै सल्लाह दिँदैछु, नराम्रो नमानम् है। हाइकुमा एउटा छोटो टाउको र तीन हरफको जीऊ राखेर लेख्ने चलन छ। तीन हरफहरु ५-७-५ को नियममा भए भने झन राम्रो। तपाईँकै एउटा हाइकुलाई यस्सो तानतुन पारौँ है त! "विदेश नीति?" रन्केर गयो "हजूर", "बुझैँ" भन्यो रित्तै फर्कियो!
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lau ta lau
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Posted on 11-03-05 6:38
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mero prayas kasto chha gautam ji, yeso herau haita khawakka khokyo chhewaima gulab ko phul phulyo chhoto jiban
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Gautam B.
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Posted on 11-03-05 7:08
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लौ त लौ ब्रो, एउस्पट (EXPERT) त म पनि होइन है, तैपनि सल्लाह है यो छुचो मुखको। तपाइँको यो हाईकुको विषय के हो? मेरो अर्थको आधारमा चैँ यसो गरौँ; "जीवन" ख्वाक्क खोक्यो सन्ताप मात्रै बोक्यो छोटो रहेछ।
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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-03-05 9:59
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के गरनु मित्र, रिमिX को जमाना छ, मेरो हाइकु पनि तेसतै भयो कि कसो...नेपालि साहित्?य मा बहुत रुची छ तर किन किन फुरदैन र नियम कानुन पनि तेति थाह छैन. मित्र हरु को संगत ले केहि हुन्?छ कि भनेर येसो लागेको नि, सुझाब दिदै गरुम न है त.
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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-03-05 10:04
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Gautam Jee... BAHUT RAMRO SUJAB DINU BHYO. Aaba yeso kasari maan ka kura kholne ra lekhne ho tyo pani yeso siakunu paro yo Diwana lai. Maile yeso ali ali ta lekhne pryash gardai chhu tara k huncha k huncha,,,ali furdaina kya. Gajal ka pani niyam kanun haru bhanum na hai ta. DHNYABAAD,
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Gautam B.
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Posted on 11-03-05 10:42
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दिल दिवानाजी, गजलका नियमका बारेमा शिरिष गुरुको धागोमा (ASAD........)नेपेजीले बडो राम्रोसंग उदाहरण दिएर प्रष्ट्याउनु भएको छ। अलिक अगाडीनै हो, त्यसैले त्यो धागोलाई पूरै खोलेर पढ्नुहोला। लेख्ने भनेको यस्तै हो, निरन्तरताले खार्दै लान्छ। म पनि सिक्दै छु, साझामा समान रुचिका साथीहरु धेरै छन्। आउनुस् संगै हिँडौँ, मनको वह पोखौँ, संगै लेखौँ आफ्नो मनको मात्रै किन? अरुका आँखाको पनि दुनिया देखौँ।
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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-04-05 12:56
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धन्?यबाद गौतम जि, मैले नेपे जि को खुलासा पनि हेरे, निकै सटीक र स्?पस्?ट छ, छरलगं भयो. यो पनि एउटा पढी हालौ न त: तपाईको सुजाब चाहि अनिबाृय छ नि. आफनो नजर बाट पनि हेरें अरुको नजर बाट पनि हेरें दुनिया देखेरै बसें अनि धेरै बेर तेसैमा हराए अलि पर पुगेपछि फरकेर हेरें अनि पो बल्?ल मैले दुनिया चिने
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Moneyminded
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Posted on 11-04-05 1:23
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sabai le try gareko dekehra maile ne sanyo prayas gareko chu.....kasto bhul chuk bhayo sudhar dinu hola....sikne mauka paauthiye रितो भितो खाली माउसुली छ। शिकार पासो न त गनगन
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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 11-04-05 1:24
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लौ भो अब? यो डिल्ले त कस्तो मान्छे रे छ। सम्मै देख्दिनी भन्या चारैतिर।
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Dada_Giri
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Posted on 11-04-05 1:26
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newuser
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Posted on 11-04-05 1:53
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To moneyminded bro:) भविष्यको चिन्ता पैसा कमाउने धन्दा अझै अविवाहित!
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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-04-05 2:32
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लु त यो पनि हेरुम है, द्रिष्?य फेरि देखाउँ? राम्रो सग देखि?यो बन्?द गरियो यसको चैं राम्रै चरचा चल्?छ कि? गुरुहरु के छ बिचार..........
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newuser
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Posted on 11-04-05 2:43
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अंग्रेजीमा हाइकु लेख्ने चलन छ कि छैन ? म एउटा लेख्दिन्छु है। SAJHA feeling Lazy nothing to do sajha.com
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Dil Diwana
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Posted on 11-04-05 2:54
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गजब लेख्?नुभयो यार...........बहुत सहि भन्?नुभयो. म पनि थपौं है त काज बेकारि मान्?छे जिन्?दगि रहुन्?जेल यस्?तै रहेछ
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Hellbound
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Posted on 11-04-05 1:26
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Mountains shall meet sea the spring creek yearns not for peace. Exploding of life.
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